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This is taken from TMI HP Basecamp sample movie of evaluation.
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Thank you for sharing your research with us, Michael.
That was a well-delivered speech and I noticed several areas where you have improved since your last speech.
The thing that stood out to me the most during the presentation was the use of hand gestures.
Based on the conversation before the meeting I know this was an area you are specifically focused on.
I could really tell you've been practicing this.
I thought it was particularly effective the way you used your hands to emphasize your opening story about listeners who are bored and disengaged.
It really helped to pull me into the speech.
I know our grammarian was keeping count, but I also noticed that the number of "ums" you used was much less in this speech than in your last.
Good work.
Since this is a research project, one of the goals is to use credible sources and share it with your audience.
I liked the way you did this with your final few tips, but I also noticed that you had no ex..